IN: DARK LOCKER.
Fade In
HEAVY BREATHING
Tyler is imprisoned from inside of the locker. From his POV we can only see three narrow slivers of light coming from an above.
Tyler can feel himself shrinking as the locker is growing larger. We begin to hear whispers over the heavy breathing. They are very faint at first. There is heavy breathing, and slowly the shaft of light is moving away from it. It is as if we are getting pulled into a black hole.
Pitch Dark
Extreme use of scale
Heavy breathing
We feel very small, and it feels like we are leaving the world.
EUGENE
(whispers) No one's going to help you
Shot 1 POV from inside the locker room.
Shot 3 We see only a narrow shaft of light, and we are shrinking.
EUGENE
(whispers) No one's going to help you.
Hey Michael Jordan?
Shot 4 Slowly the light is moving away from us getting smaller.
Hey Loser…..
Where did you learn to play?
From you mommy?
(louder whispers) You are pathetic.
Weirdo
EUGENE
(whispers) No one's going to help you.
Hey Michael Jordan?
Hey Loser…..
Where did you learn to play?
From you mommy?
The soft whispers turn into loud yelling.
EUGENE
WHIMP!
HOPE YOU DIE!
Laughter
Shot 5 As things begin to disappear. We here a sound from the phone.
LOUD PHONE ALERT
Suddenly from the darkness of the large locker, a phone display screen from above.
The phone screen moves closer to the viewer.
Pause
Heavy breathing
Suddenly the Phone comes up, and we can see cyber messages from the bully. It first is slow and then becomes an overwhelming onslaught of cyber attacks from our phone.
Shot 6 We see a Phone turn on and come to sight. It is far away.
Shot 6 Gradually it gets closer, and we can see the bully text message comes in.
Shot 7 There are more, and it is getting larger and coming at us.
Shot 8 It escalates in intensity and comes to the Camera.
Shot 9 It is coming from every angle now No matter we turn it is attacking us.
There are cyber insults
Text message
Pictures of bullying
Videos of bullying
Things escalate quickly and the viewer is bombarded with digital shrapnel from various social media platform hitting from the right, left, back, top everywhere.
We are overwhelmed by the intensity and frequency.
Shot 10 Flash of white light and fade into darkness again.
Shot 11 Pitch black with only breathing.We here sound of him picking up a phone and texting.
Fade to black
Suddenly the door opens we see the victim friend opening the door.
The scale is still small.
Shot 16 From inside the locker we see the door opening.
KNOCK KNOCK
Shot 17 The door slowly open
Sot 18 We can see the kid's friend head look inside
Shot 19 We can see another kid there too.
Slowly we can see a small crack from the locker door. David's head peeks in. As the door opens up, we can see other bystanders in the background.
Fade to Out.
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